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Joined: Monday, November 27, 2017
Last Visit: Tuesday, October 20, 2020 7:19:41 PM
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Topic: As a contract killer...
Posted: Tuesday, October 20, 2020 7:19:40 PM
FounDit wrote:
Amybal wrote:
Hi, is there anything wrong in these sentences?
Very good. Perhaps a comma or two.
Short summary
As a contract killer investigates a kidnapping related to him in Thailand, he finds himself pursued by a man whose brother he has killed.

Long summary
Contract killer In-nam, who has recently completed his final contract, flies to Thailand to investigate a shocking kidnapping case, as he believes the victim is his next of kin. There, he teams up with Yui to locate and rescue the kidnapped child. At the same time, he will have to prevent himself from being killed by Ray, a man whose brother he has assassinated, and is now looking for revenge.


Well done, indeed!!
Topic: Here rides!
Posted: Monday, October 19, 2020 8:56:35 AM
Romany wrote:

There are very few verbs which are introduced by "here."

They are 'comes', 'is' & 'lies' ( for grave headstones).

So here "rides" is not acceptable.

However, even with this change the sentence is still not correct because then we have:

"Here comes a bicycle a boy" or "Here comes a boy a bicycle." (I don't think I need to explain why, as your level of English will confirm that these aren't valid)

"Here comes a boy riding a bicycle." is the correct way to express this thought.


Well said, it is grammar 101 knowing it makes no sense to say "here a boy a bicycle". It's just words strung together with no meaning.
Topic: Stimulus Checks
Posted: Monday, October 19, 2020 8:36:03 AM
It's okay for the first lady to spend hundreds of thousands of dollars for a bedroom on Airforce One, but American citizens can't get any relief from the lack of work and financial hardships by issuing another stimulus check. Where is the justice in that?
Topic: junk/stuff
Posted: Saturday, October 17, 2020 1:37:24 PM
.....all OF THIS junk/stuff
Topic: you be getting rid of stuff
Posted: Friday, October 16, 2020 5:24:59 AM
What's the bolded part?
Topic: non-losing
Posted: Friday, October 16, 2020 4:56:08 AM
Chess is a wonderful game!!
Topic: After being bewitched...
Posted: Thursday, October 15, 2020 2:48:30 PM
I believe so
Topic: Radio frequency treatments
Posted: Tuesday, October 13, 2020 5:04:56 PM
Has anyone experienced radio frequency treatments, and if so was it successful?
Topic: by anyone
Posted: Tuesday, October 13, 2020 5:02:16 PM
Loving anybody would not be a strange emotion.
Topic: Mars Mission
Posted: Monday, October 12, 2020 6:25:07 PM
Contrary to popular belief, there is no trip to Mars scheduled anytime in the near future. There is still years of preparation and exploration to be done. I am 62 years old and I doubt I will see it happen in my lifetime.