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Topic: She likes to hold pillow.
Posted: Tuesday, August 18, 2015 12:50:38 AM
The verb in your sentence is likes.
Topic: They were not allow you to swim due to rain.
Posted: Sunday, August 9, 2015 11:40:47 AM
Due to is appropriate when it follows a form of the verb to be when the form of the verb to be is used simply and alone.
The pool closure was due to rain.
Her anger was due to her immaturity.

Because of is appropriate when it follows verbs other than to be.
Be careful though, other verbs can include forms of to be (as opposed to the verb to be used simply and alone).
The pool was closed because of rain.
She was angry because of her disappointment.

Now that I have attempted to answer your question, allow me to edit your entire piece:
The mother promised her daughter she would take her to the swimming pool.
Unfortunately, it started raining and they couldn't go.
The daughter was upset so the mother told her, "Even if I take you, they will not allow you to swim while it is raining."

Topic: Supposed to
Posted: Wednesday, August 5, 2015 4:05:54 AM
The first two both imply an expectation or requirement from someone or something other than yourself. The third one generally means it is your own plan to go.
Topic: Yesterday there was a aircraft flying over/around our house?
Posted: Wednesday, August 5, 2015 3:55:11 AM
I, too, would use circling over our house because flying over implies a straight line of flight, and around implies on the same level with the house, which would be too low to be realistic. Circling works well because it imparts the meaning of your circle diagram. To use the word flying is unnecessary in describing the activity of an aircraft. What else would an aircraft be doing, after all?

Your second sentence contains an error. You have an adverb (loudly) modifying a noun (sound). You need the adjective loud. Sounds are never loudly, but they can be very loud.
Topic: Metaphor
Posted: Wednesday, July 29, 2015 7:12:01 PM
That would be a simile, not a metaphor.
Topic: Exact Meaning of Idiom
Posted: Monday, July 27, 2015 7:52:54 PM
I would make it simpler and cleaner: "There was something magical, I thought, in the way instruments are brought to life in the creation of music."
Topic: change one letter game
Posted: Saturday, July 25, 2015 7:03:33 PM
I gazed at the sky alit with stars.
Topic: how to say two thing occure at the same time.
Posted: Saturday, July 25, 2015 6:20:30 PM
The person reported to the office his conclusion that the office should better funded.