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Volcano
Posted: Sunday, June 21, 2015 7:38:34 AM
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Could you please check my lyrics translation?


Was it so hard to please me with a word?
To do what was expected?
Love in me is saying good bye little by little

Many came closer to me
Many wanted me so much, but it didn't happen
I didn't choose a path without you

Many talked to me
Many tried to force me into things
I didn't go anywhere away from you

You are temperamental, completely different
One of two words you say always causes trouble
You are unbearable, love is dying

The anger in you is already determined
The infinitive, swollen ego is harmful
It ruins my pure and clean nature

Tomahawk71
Posted: Monday, June 22, 2015 8:10:44 AM

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And the original lyrics?
TheSwede
Posted: Tuesday, June 23, 2015 6:39:11 AM
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Looks good to me! :)
Irina Ioana
Posted: Wednesday, June 24, 2015 2:21:11 AM

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"Love in me is saying good bye little by little"

I think it would make a little bit more sense here if you said "THE love in me..."

Also here "The infinitive, swollen ego is harmful" if the EGO is th noun you are talking about it should be infinite(adj) not infinitive(n).

Hope it helps :)
Volcano
Posted: Wednesday, June 24, 2015 3:06:54 PM
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Thank you, any other idea?
Drag0nspeaker
Posted: Wednesday, June 24, 2015 4:28:15 PM

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Well, I don't know the song - however, with those small changes suggested by Irina, it seems good.

I didn't notice the 'infinitive', myself, but I think 'infinite' makes more sense.
Volcano
Posted: Thursday, June 25, 2015 2:50:07 PM
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Drag0nspeaker wrote:
Well, I don't know the song - however, with those small changes suggested by Irina, it seems good.

I didn't notice the 'infinitive', myself, but I think 'infinite' makes more sense.


Yes, it should have been infinite, I wrote it wrong. Besides, I wonder "One of two words you say always causes trouble" makes sense.
Drag0nspeaker
Posted: Thursday, June 25, 2015 4:30:53 PM

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Hi again.

Well, honestly, I don't know.

I guessed that somewhere in the song was a reference to two words (possibly opposites like 'love' and 'hate').

I guessed that whenever he/she said either of those words, it meant trouble.
It's a possibility. I don't know what else it could mean.
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