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Fruity
Posted: Thursday, October 14, 2021 9:02:14 AM

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We are surrounded by so many cultural assets that we tend to take them for granted. However, each of them represents many years of efforts by a lot of people to preserve them. We should keep in mind that neglecting them means that we don't appreciate the efforts made by those people.

Would you proofread this passage?
sureshot
Posted: Thursday, October 14, 2021 9:53:38 AM
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Fruity wrote:
We are surrounded by so many cultural assets that we tend to take them for granted. However, each of them represents many years of efforts by a lot of people to preserve them. We should keep in mind that neglecting them means that we don't appreciate the efforts made by those people.

Would you proofread this passage?

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I would prefer to make one change and say "... neglecting them implies that... "
Fruity
Posted: Thursday, October 14, 2021 5:44:19 PM

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Angel Thanks so much, sureshot.
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