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Amybal
Posted: Friday, July 16, 2021 2:22:36 PM
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Hi, is there anything wrong in these sentences?

A traffic accident lands Sen to believe that he is the one responsible for Yin's death. Lin Yin seems to be beseeching Tan Sen to marry her in the afterlife. But is she really dead?
Juegos Video
Posted: Friday, July 16, 2021 4:31:27 PM

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Amybal wrote:
Hi, is there anything wrong in these sentences?

A traffic accident lands Sen to believe that he is the one responsible for Yin's death. Lin Yin seems to be beseeching Tan Sen to marry her in the afterlife. But is she really dead?


In this sentence, yes: "A traffic accident lands Sen to believe that he is the one responsible for Yin's death."

It should read "...leads Sen to believe..."
Amybal
Posted: Saturday, July 17, 2021 2:07:21 PM
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Opss, I overlooked that one. Thank you Juegos Video.

It should read "...leads Sen to believe..."
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