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Amybal
Posted: Friday, July 16, 2021 2:20:52 PM
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Hi, is there anything wrong in these sentences?

Short summary
A clumsy and easily frightened man spends the night in a haunted mansion where a breathtaking ghost attempts to seduce him.

Long summary
Government official Ling Choi Sin journeys to the parched Black Mountain Village, to help its inhabitants find water. As he leads a group of volunteers up the haunted mountain, he encounters a lovely girl named Siu Sin. But he doesn't know that she is a ghost, usually not leaving any man alive.
Juegos Video
Posted: Friday, July 16, 2021 4:34:13 PM

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Amybal wrote:
Hi, is there anything wrong in these sentences?

Short summary
A clumsy and easily frightened man spends the night in a haunted mansion where a breathtaking ghost attempts to seduce him.

Long summary
Government official Ling Choi Sin journeys to the parched Black Mountain Village, to help its inhabitants find water. As he leads a group of volunteers up the haunted mountain, he encounters a lovely girl named Siu Sin. But he doesn't know that she is a ghost, usually not leaving any man alive.


All correct. :)
Mokba
Posted: Saturday, July 17, 2021 5:18:22 AM
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Amybal wrote:

Long summary
Government official Ling Choi Sin journeys to the parched Black Mountain Village, to help its inhabitants find water. As he leads a group of volunteers up the haunted mountain, he encounters a lovely girl named Siu Sin. But he doesn't know that she is a ghost, usually not leaving any man alive.


Government official Ling Choi Sin journeys to the parched Black Mountain Village, to help its parched inhabitants find water.

Amybal
Posted: Saturday, July 17, 2021 2:08:06 PM
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Thank you Juegos Video and Mokba.
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