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Amybal
Posted: Friday, July 16, 2021 1:37:19 PM
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Hi, is there anything wrong in these sentences?

This is a collection consists of Zombie Virus: Behind the Scenes, Tayangan Perdana Zombie Virus and Trailer Zombie Virus.

Short summary
This box set includes Zombie Virus: Behind the Scenes, Tayangan Perdana Zombie Virus and Trailer Zombie Virus. The story of a man needs to find a cure for a zombie virus.

Long summary

This collection includes Zombie Virus: Behind the Scenes, Tayangan Perdana Zombie Virus and Trailer Zombie Virus. Watch how the people behind, "Zombie Virus" created the movie in Zombie Virus: Behind the Scenes. Then, get a glimpse of Tayangan Perdana Zombie Virus and Trailer Zombie Virus, which depicts a story of an ordinary man who dreams of becoming a secret agent finds himself tasked with finding a cure for a zombie virus while racing against time.
Juegos Video
Posted: Friday, July 16, 2021 5:18:15 PM

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Amybal wrote:
Hi, is there anything wrong in these sentences?

This is a collection consists of Zombie Virus: Behind the Scenes, Tayangan Perdana Zombie Virus and Trailer Zombie Virus.

Short summary
This box set includes Zombie Virus: Behind the Scenes, Tayangan Perdana Zombie Virus and Trailer Zombie Virus. The story of a man needs to find a cure for a zombie virus.

Long summary

This collection includes Zombie Virus: Behind the Scenes, Tayangan Perdana Zombie Virus and Trailer Zombie Virus. Watch how the people behind, "Zombie Virus" created the movie in Zombie Virus: Behind the Scenes. Then, get a glimpse of Tayangan Perdana Zombie Virus and Trailer Zombie Virus, which depicts a story of an ordinary man who dreams of becoming a secret agent finds himself tasked with finding a cure for a zombie virus while racing against time.


Omit this comma, as it should usually be used before the start of a statement:

"Watch how the people behind,"

The verb agreement is wrong in this sentence, as you clearly have an "and" which makes the verb plural:

"which depicts a story of an ordinary man"--it should be "depict"

FounDit
Posted: Friday, July 16, 2021 5:45:59 PM

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Amybal wrote:
Hi, is there anything wrong in these sentences?
My suggestions:

This is a collection consists of Zombie Virus: Behind the Scenes, Tayangan Perdana Zombie Virus and Trailer Zombie Virus.

Short summary
This box set includes Zombie Virus: Behind the Scenes, Tayangan Perdana Zombie Virus and Trailer Zombie Virus. The story of a man who needs to find a cure for a zombie virus.

Long summary

This collection includes Zombie Virus: Behind the Scenes, Tayangan Perdana Zombie Virus and Trailer Zombie Virus. Watch how the people behind, (omit) "Zombie Virus" created the movie in Zombie Virus: Behind the Scenes. Then, get a glimpse of Tayangan Perdana Zombie Virus and Trailer Zombie Virus, which (or, both of which) depict the story of an ordinary man who dreams of becoming a secret agent, and who finds himself tasked with finding a cure for a zombie virus while racing against time.
Amybal
Posted: Saturday, July 17, 2021 2:06:02 PM
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Thank you FounDit and Juegos Video.
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