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Dukul
Posted: Sunday, May 2, 2021 9:57:55 AM

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Are these sentences grammatically correct and natural enough?


You raise your voice against slavery which has existed since time immemorial and was abolished in 1948. But at the same time you are not criticising the people involved in neo-slavery: sugar daddies, call girls, etc. You know what? It's a rank hypocrisy. I can't explain how utterly biased you are!
Drag0nspeaker
Posted: Sunday, May 2, 2021 10:08:36 AM

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It's good.

The only thing which 'caught my eye' was the use of "hypocrisy".

It is most usually used as an uncountable noun. (It can be countable, and that does fit here, so your sentence is not wrong.)

I'd 'expect' it to say "It's rank hypocrisy" or "You know what? That's rank hypocrisy."
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