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Amybal
Posted: Wednesday, April 7, 2021 2:13:32 AM
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Hi, is there anything wrong in these sentences?

Short summary
When a rookie secret agent and private detective form the unlikely partnership to investigate a large-scale gun smuggling case between China and Korea, the two get caught up in a dangerous scheme.

Long summary
A chinese secret agent Da-hee receives intel that a large number of illegal firearms are being smuggled into Korea and is sent to investigate the case. She meets Su-han, who was supposed to help her with the case but due to his lackluster skills, they keep fighting over really trivial things. But as their witnesses are suddenly murdered, the two of them quickly become the prime suspects.

Is there a upper case for "C" : chinese in the long summary?
FounDit
Posted: Wednesday, April 7, 2021 10:48:20 AM

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Amybal wrote:
Hi, is there anything wrong in these sentences?
"the" unlikely partnership can work, but "an" unlikely partnership would normally be used. The different words create a contrasting sense of the partnership. Using "the" conveys the idea it was done purposefully/specifically, while "an" conveys a description of something unplanned.
Short summary
When a rookie secret agent and private detective form the/an unlikely partnership to investigate a large-scale gun smuggling case between China and Korea, the two get caught up in a dangerous scheme.

Long summary
A Chinese secret agent, Da-hee, receives intel that a large number of illegal firearms are being smuggled into Korea, and is sent to investigate the case. She meets Su-han, who was supposed to help her with the case, but due to his lackluster skills, they keep fighting over really trivial things. But when their witnesses are suddenly murdered, the two of them quickly become the prime suspects.

Is there a upper case for "C" : chinese in the long summary? Yes.
Amybal
Posted: Monday, April 12, 2021 9:45:22 AM
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Thank you so much, FounDit. This is so helpful.
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