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Atatürk
Posted: Thursday, November 15, 2018 4:25:32 AM

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Hope therapy in dysthymia cases reduces negative symptoms and improves performance in different areas such as flexibility, quality of life, coping with and protection against trauma and injuries. Therefore, as part of the therapeutic program for dysthymia sufferers, it is recommended to deploy proper healthcare staff in order to offer a better and faster treatment for them.

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Shivanand
Posted: Thursday, November 15, 2018 5:45:54 AM
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The paragraph is very accurate and grammatically correct! However, if the targeted readers are paramedics and common people, you would do well to break the sentences like:

Hope therapy in dysthymia cases reduces negative symptoms. It improves performance in different areas such as flexibility and quality of life. It helps in coping with and protection against trauma and injuries. Therefore, as part of the therapeutic program for dysthymia sufferers, it is recommended to deploy trained healthcare staff for this. This helps in providing better and faster treatment for them.



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