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robjen
Posted: Saturday, June 23, 2018 10:39:26 PM
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(1) The new collector is not sure if the antique cup without the original lid is valuable.

(2) The new collector is not sure if the antique cup is valuable without the original lid.

Which sentence sounds more natural to native speakers? Thanks.
palapaguy
Posted: Saturday, June 23, 2018 11:03:54 PM

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The two sound equally natural, but there is a very slight difference in meaning/emphasis between them.
Drag0nspeaker
Posted: Saturday, June 23, 2018 11:46:42 PM

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I agree - both sentences sound OK.

(1) The new collector is not sure if the antique cup without the original lid is valuable.
This says
a. the cup does not have its original lid
b. The collector is not sure whether it's a valuable cup.

(2) The new collector is not sure if the antique cup is valuable without the original lid.
a. the cup may or may not have its original lid right now
b. it is likely that the 'cup and lid' pair would be valuable
c. the collector is not sure whether the cup alone would be valuable.



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sureshot
Posted: Sunday, June 24, 2018 2:05:54 AM
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robjen wrote:
(1) The new collector is not sure if the antique cup without the original lid is valuable.

(2) The new collector is not sure if the antique cup is valuable without the original lid.

Which sentence sounds more natural to native speakers? Thanks.


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In my view, sentence 1 is better than the first. Both may sound OK, but the first places the phrase "without the original lid" immediately after the noun it is related to.
FounDit
Posted: Sunday, June 24, 2018 10:08:14 AM

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robjen wrote:
(1) The new collector is not sure if the antique cup without the original lid is valuable.

(2) The new collector is not sure if the antique cup is valuable without the original lid.

Which sentence sounds more natural to native speakers? Thanks.


I agree that both sound good, but to me #2 sounds a bit more natural, because it says the collector is not sure the cup has value, then explains why. But there isn't anything wrong with #1. It really depends on what the speaker is focusing on when saying this.


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Wilmar (USA)
Posted: Sunday, June 24, 2018 10:46:37 AM

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These sentences mean 2 different things. Which is "more natural" depends entirely on the intended meaning.

1- The placement of "without the lid" sounds to be identifying which cup we're talking about. That lid, over there, the one without the lid -- I don't know if that is valuable or not.

2- The placement of "without the lid" now is questioning the value of an incomplete object -- a cup without its lid. We know the value of the cup when it has a lid, but when the lid is absent, the value may be greatly diminished, as if often the case.

So, each sentence is completely natural. The appropriate sentence depends entirely on the intended meaning. I have used both variations myself, depending on the circumstances. So once again, without the context, the original question cannot be answered.
Drag0nspeaker
Posted: Sunday, June 24, 2018 5:20:44 PM

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Yes - the way Wilmar has written it shows the difference (to me) quite clearly.

"the antique cup without the original lid" is a noun-phrase.
In this phrase, "without the original lid" is a preposition phrase, acting as an adjective, and defines 'cup'.

"is valuable without the original lid" is a verb-phrase.
In this phrase, "without the original lid" is a preposition phrase, acting as an adverb of condition or circumstance.
It says which circumstances make the collector uncertain.

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