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Atatürk
Posted: Thursday, June 10, 2021 9:36:29 AM

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Would you please have a look at the following paragraph?

Nonetheless, celebrities are also human beings and they have aspects of life that the public is by no means privy to. It is not fair for the media to write about things that celebrities themselves want to hide. For example, some of them may, like any ordinary individual, stumble into an unhealthy relationship or get involved in substance abuse, and obviously, they have every right to hate paparazzi digging into such private affairs. Some may even be going through a painful breakup or bouts of depression, longing for peace and solitude to recover. While the public interest in their private life is understandable, it does not give the media the license to post unsavory details of their private lives.
FounDit
Posted: Thursday, June 10, 2021 10:38:40 AM

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Atatürk wrote:
Would you please have a look at the following paragraph?
It looks very good. I see a couple of places where a comma might be added.

Nonetheless, celebrities are also human beings and they have aspects of life that the public is by no means privy to. It is not fair for the media to write about things that celebrities themselves want to hide. For example, some of them may, like any ordinary individual, stumble into an unhealthy relationship, or get involved in substance abuse, and obviously, they have every right to hate paparazzi digging into such private affairs. Some may even be going through a painful breakup, or bouts of depression, longing for peace and solitude to recover. While the public interest in their private life is understandable, it does not give the media the license to post unsavory details of their private lives.
Atatürk
Posted: Thursday, June 10, 2021 11:06:41 AM

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Thank you ever so much, FD.
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