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User Name: jacobusmaximus
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Occupation: Retired
Interests: Religion, History
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Last Visit: Wednesday, September 19, 2018 12:29:18 PM
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Topic: Haiku Fun
Posted: Wednesday, September 19, 2018 12:28:45 PM
Be here now today
And stay until the morning
When the Sun comes up.

I remember, therefore I am.
Topic: change one letter game
Posted: Wednesday, September 19, 2018 12:25:49 PM
It won't get LEFT behind there

I remember, therefore I am.
Topic: FIRST AND LAST LETTERS COMES IN UPCOMING WORDS
Posted: Wednesday, September 19, 2018 12:22:53 PM
Boxer

I remember, therefore I am.
Topic: Tamil Movie
Posted: Saturday, September 15, 2018 5:44:36 PM
Amybal wrote:
Hi, do you see anything grammatically wrong in these sentence?

Short summary
The life journey of a young man who is full of passion. The story embarks as he starts to ponder on the importance of the right care and love in order to succeed in life.

Long summary
A young man who comes from a broken family and gets tangled into 2 women who offers him two very different form of love. One woman loves and cares him like a mother would which he has been missing out from and the second is a woman who loves him and empowers him to pursue his passion. How this young man makes a decision to pick one woman when both them are amazing to him in their own way.


I'm not an expert in grammar but the long summary just does not read well:

A young man who comes from a broken family gets tangled UP WITH two women who OFFER him different forms of love. One cares for him as a mother would (which he had been missing out on) and the other encourages and empowers him to pursue his passion. How the young man chooses between the two women who are equally amazing to him is an interesting story.

Food for thought?

I remember, therefore I am.
Topic: Association from the last letter
Posted: Friday, September 14, 2018 11:29:03 AM
Norway

I remember, therefore I am.
Topic: GAME: Change 3 of 6 letters now
Posted: Friday, September 14, 2018 11:27:39 AM
Titled

I remember, therefore I am.
Topic: double consonant game.
Posted: Friday, September 14, 2018 11:25:08 AM
Locality

I remember, therefore I am.
Topic: ASSOCIATION & COMMOM LETTERS
Posted: Friday, September 14, 2018 11:23:00 AM
Bistro

I remember, therefore I am.
Topic: Association with no common consonants
Posted: Friday, September 14, 2018 11:20:52 AM
Sire

I remember, therefore I am.
Topic: Change 3 or 4 of 7
Posted: Friday, September 14, 2018 11:19:22 AM
Madness

I remember, therefore I am.

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