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Topic: Ali's younger brother...
Posted: Wednesday, November 20, 2019 2:43:37 AM
Hi, is there anything wrong in these sentences?

Short summary
Ali's younger brother, Mat Arip, has fallen in with the wrong crowd, it is up to Ali to find him and bring him back home to their father, Pak Nayan.

Long summary
Ali and Fatimah are frustrated with their younger brother, Mat Arip, when he fails to come home with the grant of their inherited land. Ali will have to find Mat Arip, who has fallen in with the wrong crowd and takes part in illegal gambling and racing, and bring him home to their father, Pak Nayan.
Topic: Post the death of his...
Posted: Wednesday, November 20, 2019 2:43:01 AM
Hi, is there anything wrong in these sentences?

Short summary
Post the death of his first wife, a man who had lost faith in his religion, finds his family stuck in a dangerous situation where a supernatural force terrorizes their house.

Long summary
Akbar loses his belief in religion and God after the death of Zahra, his wife, to the point that he even refuses to teach his religion's ways to their daughter Amira. He remarries, to a woman named Renata, but his new marriage isn't as happy as his first. One day, his old friend Hassan comes to visit and try to bring him back to the right way. He finally allows Hassan to teach Amira, but strange things begin to happen in their house. Oddly, Renata is often the target of the terror.
Topic: Kathir is a military...
Posted: Wednesday, November 20, 2019 2:42:12 AM
Thank you FounDit. Based on your feedback, I have revised the summaries. Try this:

Short summary
A military intelligence officer appointed as the Special Protection Group officer to protect the Prime Minister of India after the PM receives a death threat. Will he be able to save the PM's life?

Long summary
Kathir is a military intelligence officer appointed as the Special Protection Group officer to protect the Prime Minister of India after the PM receives a death threat. Protecting the PM becomes a major challenge for Kathir as he tries desperately to do his job, and attempts to learn who is behind the threats.

Topic: Abandons by her father...
Posted: Tuesday, November 19, 2019 5:23:08 AM
Hi, is there anything wrong in these sentences?

Short summary
Abandons by her father at a young age, Zharfa grows up to be a stubborn woman who disdains her cunning stepfather and which leads to her being sent to a boarding school in Indonesia.

Long summary
Abandoned by her father at age one, Zharfa grows up into a stubborn and emotional girl. When her mother remarries, the Malaysian girl immediately dislikes her cunning new stepfather, causing her to often quarrel with him. Due to the quarrels, and her tendency to land in trouble, she ends up getting sent to study in a boarding school in neighbouring country, Indonesia.

Topic: Kathir is a military...
Posted: Tuesday, November 19, 2019 5:22:32 AM
Hi, is there anything wrong in these sentences?

Short summary
Kathir is a military intelligence officer who gets appointed as the Special Protection Group officer to protect the Prime Minister of India after the murder threat. Will he be able to save the PM's life?

Long summary
Kathir is a military intelligence officer who gets appointed as the SPG in charge of the Prime Minister of India after the PM got impressed by his performance. But the threat for the PM is not over. The journey of Kathir as the security officer of the PM goes through a rough patch and he goes through a lot of ups and downs. Why the prime minister is getting targeted frequently and how Kathir finds a way to protect the PM?
Topic: Enjoy 2 specials...
Posted: Tuesday, November 19, 2019 2:34:22 AM
Thank you FounDit.
Topic: Enjoy 2 specials...
Posted: Sunday, November 17, 2019 9:22:38 PM
Hi, is there anything wrong in these sentences?

Short summary
Enjoy 2 specials of the Equestria Girls adventures in My Little Pony: Equestria Girls – Rollercoaster of Friendship and My Little Pony Equestria Girls Sunset’s Backstage Pass.


Long summary
Enjoy 2 specials of the Equestria Girls adventures. In My Little Pony: Equestria Girls – Rollercoaster of Friendship, when Rarity and Applejack apply to work at the new Equestria World theme park, a rift forms between them when only Rarity gets hired. In My Little Pony Equestria Girls Sunset’s Backstage Pass, Sunset and Pinkie are excited to see their favorite band perform at the Music Festival, but Equestrian magic causes Sunset to get stuck reliving the first day of the festival over and over.
Topic: Due to his mother’s pressure...
Posted: Thursday, November 14, 2019 5:19:24 AM
Hi, is there anything wrong in these sentences?

Short summary
Due to his mother’s pressure and ill treatment, Zaidi and his wife move to a village mansion belonging to his grandmother where they are haunted by strange dreams and eerie screams of babies.

Long summary
Zaidi is a teacher whose rich widow mother longs for grandchildren. She often pressurizes him to remarry as his wife Azlinda has yet to bear any children. Fed up, Zaidi asks for a transfer and his new workplace turns out to be the village his late father was born in. The couple moves into his grandmother's mansion which is taken care of by its gardener where they are haunted by strange dreams and eerie screams of babies.
Topic: Due to his mother’s pressure...
Posted: Thursday, November 14, 2019 5:19:23 AM
Hi, is there anything wrong in these sentences?

Short summary
Due to his mother’s pressure and ill treatment, Zaidi and his wife move to a village mansion belonging to his grandmother where they are haunted by strange dreams and eerie screams of babies.

Long summary
Zaidi is a teacher whose rich widow mother longs for grandchildren. She often pressurizes him to remarry as his wife Azlinda has yet to bear any children. Fed up, Zaidi asks for a transfer and his new workplace turns out to be the village his late father was born in. The couple moves into his grandmother's mansion which is taken care of by its gardener where they are haunted by strange dreams and eerie screams of babies.
Topic: A man who constantly...
Posted: Thursday, November 14, 2019 5:16:18 AM
Thank you so much FounDit for the correction.

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