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kingki
Posted: Friday, November 27, 2009 3:48:47 AM
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I want to know the possibility of becomming supplier of quality garments to your.
sandraleesmith46
Posted: Friday, November 27, 2009 7:34:22 AM

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kingki, I'm not sure what it is your looking for here. Did you want to drum up business for some garment industry, or are you asking to have the sentence corrected for errors in construction and usage?

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Jyrkkä Jätkä
Posted: Friday, November 27, 2009 7:56:20 AM

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kingki wrote:
I want to know the possibility of becomming supplier of quality garments to your.

I'm interested in possibility of becoming a supplier of quality garments for you.
Though you could say it in other ways and shorter.


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musicwriter
Posted: Tuesday, December 1, 2009 8:24:31 PM

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I am desirous of becoming a supplier of quality garments to your firm.

"possibility" is usually preceded by another word like a, the, great, slight, slim, no, etc.
twinsonic
Posted: Tuesday, December 1, 2009 10:53:15 PM

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"I am interested in" sounds better than "desirous of..." I think. "I am interested in supplying your firm with quality garments."
TB
Posted: Tuesday, December 1, 2009 11:00:11 PM

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kingki wrote:
I want to know the possibility of becomming supplier of quality garments to your.


(There are lots of way to go with this, here are just a few:)

I'm interested in supplying your business (company, firm, outlet...etc.) with quality garments.

If possible, I would like to supply your business with quality garments.

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