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HAIKU for PEOPLEIn this game your haiku's last line becomes the new haiku's first line! (standard 3-line, 5 - 7 - 5-syllable pattern -- does NOT need to rhyme): It looks like fun but I've never tried haiku. So I'll start it off with one from the old masters, Etsujin. Covered with the flowers, Instantly I'd like to die In this dream of ours! (so you use "In this dream of ours" as your first line and so on...)
Laid up. Laid to rest. Laid out. Suddenly getting laid doesn't sound like fun.
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In this dream of ours Illusion becomes alive; Reality hides.
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Reality hides, But only from the blinded; Vision, guides the wise!
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Vision guides the wise, But GPS guides the lost. Why can't I have one?
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Why can't I have one? I've been a good boy all day I crave a muffin!
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I crave a muffin Of the banana nut type; Oh, how sweet it is.
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Oh, how sweet it is to meet a kindred spirit; I pray it will last.
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Always have a heart That opens like a flower You won't be lonely.
"Those who give up essential liberty to obtain a little temporary safety, deserve neither liberty nor safety." Benjamin Franklin
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You won't be lonely For there is someone waiting To rest in your heart
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They sailed their warships out into the starry sea. Their wives got horny.
"Those who give up essential liberty to obtain a little temporary safety, deserve neither liberty nor safety." Benjamin Franklin
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bugdoctor wrote:They sailed their warships out into the starry sea. Their wives got horny.
Their wives got horny And females will know this fact George Clooney caused that
"Never argue with idiots, they drag you down to their level and then beat you with experience"
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Just a little reminder of the rules, per FlashBack1968:
In this game your haiku's last line becomes the new haiku's first line!
(standard 3-line, 5 - 7 - 5-syllable pattern -- does NOT need to rhyme):
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To make it up for the last lines that did not get used:
I pray it will last To rest in your pulsing heart Our sweet memories
Thank you grammargeek for setting us straight! :)
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Our sweet memories Get us through the hardest times; I miss my little dog.
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I miss my little dog He loved to lie on my lap And wag his cute tail
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And wag his cute tail He did, each time he saw me. What a precious thing.
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(bugdoctor messed it up twice)
I pray it will last This time we call life Birth, life, death so fast
To rest in your heart Forever and ever As one, as lovers...
(before it got messed up it was really rock'n cool)
You cannot reason someone out of something they were not reasoned into. Jonathan Swift
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Birth, life, death so fast
flies by; ferris wheel
ride is unsurpassed
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pjay wrote:Birth, life, death so fast flies by; ferris wheel ride is unsurpassed
Ride is unsurpassed Walk can be a blast I'd rather sail
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I'd rather sail To where it could be And soon I will be free
You cannot reason someone out of something they were not reasoned into. Jonathan Swift
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(resuming the 5-7-5 syllable rule)
Soon I will be free To enjoy this awesome world, Relieved of sorrow.
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Relieved of sorrow Sorrow not without hope Hope without fear
You cannot reason someone out of something they were not reasoned into. Jonathan Swift
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Deep anger cold heart Blame yourself before others Become very wise.
[Author: Michael Coldham-Fussell]
Job 33:15 "In a dream, in a vision of the night, When deep sleep falls upon men, In slumberings upon the bed;" Theology 101 "If He doesn't know everything then He isn't God."
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Dreamy wrote:Deep anger cold heart Blame yourself before others Become very wise.
[Author: Michael Coldham-Fussell] Dreamy, you're not following the rules of the game. I'll continue with wercozy's last Haiku... Hope without fear my mind is clear, precious moments.
Laid up. Laid to rest. Laid out. Suddenly getting laid doesn't sound like fun.
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Precious moments Like my first birthday present A giant teddy!
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FlashBack1968 wrote:Dreamy wrote:Deep anger cold heart Blame yourself before others Become very wise.
[Author: Michael Coldham-Fussell] Dreamy, you're not following the rules of the game. I'll continue with wercozy's last Haiku... Hope without fear my mind is clear, precious moments. A giant teddy Blame yourself before others Become very wise.
Job 33:15 "In a dream, in a vision of the night, When deep sleep falls upon men, In slumberings upon the bed;" Theology 101 "If He doesn't know everything then He isn't God."
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Become very wise For there is competition In this vast vast world.
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kiran_11 wrote:Become very wise For there is competition In this vast vast world. In this vast vast world Not confined by its matter Birdsong resonates
Job 33:15 "In a dream, in a vision of the night, When deep sleep falls upon men, In slumberings upon the bed;" Theology 101 "If He doesn't know everything then He isn't God."
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Birdsong resonates With echoing chirps and tweets My heart leaps with joy
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My heart leaps with joy At every act of charity That's truly selfless
"Oh ye Lords of Ladies Intellectual/ Inform us truly have they not henpecked y'all?" ~George Gordon Noel Byron
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that's truly selfless give your love without asking and share it with joy
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And share it with joy Or she will trample you flat In a fit of rage
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In a fit of rage The door was slammed And bags were packed
"I believe that banking institutions are more dangerous to our liberties than standing armies. If the American people ever allow private banks to control the issue of their currency, first by inflation, then by deflation, the banks and corporations that will grow up around [the banks] will deprive the people of all property until their children wake-up homeless on the continent their fathers conquered. The issuing power should be taken from the banks and restored to the people, to whom it properly belongs." -Thomas Jefferson
'Write a little each day, without hope and without despair.' Vowler[/size][/size]
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*** AGAIN - THE RULES.
standard 3-line, 5 - 7 - 5-syllable pattern -- does NOT need to rhyme)***
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In a fit of rage The front door was slammed And designer bags were packed
"I believe that banking institutions are more dangerous to our liberties than standing armies. If the American people ever allow private banks to control the issue of their currency, first by inflation, then by deflation, the banks and corporations that will grow up around [the banks] will deprive the people of all property until their children wake-up homeless on the continent their fathers conquered. The issuing power should be taken from the banks and restored to the people, to whom it properly belongs." -Thomas Jefferson
'Write a little each day, without hope and without despair.' Vowler[/size][/size]
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