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Zeiger
Posted: Sunday, August 12, 2012 7:14:47 PM
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Joined: 8/12/2012
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Location: Canada
Bonjour, je suis un nouvelliste de science-fiction et je suis besoin d'aide pour d'un advertisement français. S'il vous plaît, j'essaie d'utiliser les mots internationale, pas régionale ou locale. Merci bien

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Vous avez une psychotique résidant parmi vous. Bruton est un psycho qui a abusé beaucoup de clients, y compris ses. Il réside à 38 Antares. Parce que, il est un contrôleur, il a des connexions et l'expertise nécessaires pour éviter la détection, mais qui ne vous sauvera pas. Tenez-vous et de vos biens en toute sécurité!


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You have a psychotic living among you. Bruton is a psycho who has abused many customers including his own. He lives at 38 Antares. Being a controller, he has the connections and expertise to avoid detection, but that won’t save you. Keep yourself and your possessions safe!
SandraM
Posted: Monday, August 13, 2012 4:17:02 AM
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Joined: 3/11/2009
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Hello Zeiger,
Here are a few corrections although I suggest you turn to a professional translator who will be able to do a job better suited to your needs.

Zeiger wrote:
Vous avez un psychotique parmi vous. Bruton est un psycho qui a abusé de beaucoup de clients,

this phrasing won't work very well if you mean the guy has scammed clients.

Zeiger wrote:
y compris les siens. Il réside à 38 Antares. Parce qu'il est un contrôleur, il a les connexions et l'expertise nécessaires pour éviter d'être repéré, mais ça ne vous sauvera pas. Tenez-vous et vos biens hors de portée !

Hope this helps.
Zeiger
Posted: Sunday, August 19, 2012 10:28:30 PM
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Thank you for your quick response. Actually the original phrasing could be changed to be more general. What if I wanted to say "..has done harm to many clients..."?
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