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Amybal
Posted: Wednesday, December 5, 2018 3:52:26 AM
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Hi, there is anything wrong in these sentences?

This is a box set.

Short summary
Experience 4 times the terror with this action-packed Predator movies, including the original Predator that started it all, along with Predator 2, Predators and The Predator!

Long summary
Experience four times the terror with a killer collection of action-packed Predator movies focusing on the Yautja, commonly referred to simply as "the Predator", an extraterrestrial creature that hunts and kills other dangerous lifeforms, including humans, for sport and honor in Predator, Predator 2, Predators and The Predator!
Drag0nspeaker
Posted: Wednesday, December 5, 2018 4:32:05 AM

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I think you were not concentrating, here.
I know you know these 'rules' . . .

To ask a question, you need to reverse the "there is" to "Is there?"

You used "this" (singular) with "movies" (plural).

Wyrd bið ful aræd - bull!
NKM
Posted: Wednesday, December 5, 2018 11:21:34 AM

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It should be "with this action-packed Predator set " or " with these action-packed Predator movies".

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