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Atatürk
Posted: Friday, November 9, 2018 1:18:39 PM
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Subsequently, they were divided randomly into two groups of twenty people: control and experimental.

Any improvements?
RuthP
Posted: Friday, November 9, 2018 2:20:59 PM

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Atatürk wrote:
Subsequently, they were divided randomly into two groups of twenty people each: control and experimental.

Any improvements?

Not that that is actually necessary. I am just what they call a "suspenders-and-belt" kind of person when it comes to making it hard for the reader to get lost.
FounDit
Posted: Saturday, November 10, 2018 12:41:48 PM

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I'm betting you will soon have to explain the "suspenders-and-belt" description...*Laughs*

We should look to the past to learn from it, not destroy our future because of it — FounDit
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