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Amybal
Posted: Wednesday, October 10, 2018 6:03:15 AM
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Hi, do you see anything grammatically wrong in these sentence?

Short summary
In Los Angeles, John Constantine uses his skills as a demon hunter and master of the dark arts to protect the world from the supernatural terrors that threaten it.

Long summary
In Los Angeles, armed with an arcane knowledge of the dark arts and a wicked wit, John Constantine faces his greatest challenge when he attempts to save his best friend's daughter from the demon Beroul - who intends to turn the city of angels into his own demonic kingdom.
FounDit
Posted: Wednesday, October 10, 2018 12:50:06 PM

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Amybal wrote:
Hi, do you see anything grammatically wrong in these sentence?
No, it all looks good to me. Well done.

Short summary
In Los Angeles, John Constantine uses his skills as a demon hunter and master of the dark arts to protect the world from the supernatural terrors that threaten it.

Long summary
In Los Angeles, armed with an arcane knowledge of the dark arts and a wicked wit, John Constantine faces his greatest challenge when he attempts to save his best friend's daughter from the demon Beroul - who intends to turn the city of angels into his own demonic kingdom.


We should look to the past to learn from it, not destroy our future because of it — FounDit
Amybal
Posted: Thursday, October 11, 2018 3:45:50 AM
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Thank you, FounDit Dancing
Drag0nspeaker
Posted: Thursday, October 11, 2018 6:13:09 AM

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Hi, Amybal.

It's not a very good joke but . . .

". . . intends to turn the city of angels into a city of demons".


Wyrd bið ful aræd - bull!
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