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D00M
Posted: Friday, July 13, 2018 4:10:57 PM

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Hello respect teachers,

Is the following national English?

A private school benefits some sections of
school-age populations only.

I am looking forward to your answers.
NKM
Posted: Friday, July 13, 2018 6:09:02 PM

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It's not natural.

To begin with, "only" is in the wrong place in the sentence.

Besides that, "sections" is not the right word. "Parts" (or perhaps "segments") would be better.

And is there more than one school-age population?

 "A private school benefits only certain parts of the school-age population."

palapaguy
Posted: Friday, July 13, 2018 11:08:28 PM

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D00M wrote:
Hello respect teachers,

Is the following national English?

A private school benefits some sections of
school-age populations only.


If I understand your meaning, I suggest: Private schools benefit only some school-age populations.
Drag0nspeaker
Posted: Sunday, July 15, 2018 7:04:29 PM

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As NKM says, there is only ONE school-age population. It is ALL the people of school age.

pop·u·la·tion n.
2. The total number of inhabitants constituting a particular race, class, or group in a specified area.


Private schools benefit only some parts of the school-age population.
or
A private school benefits only some members of the school-age population.

Wyrd bið ful aræd - bull!
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