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Amybal
Posted: Thursday, July 12, 2018 3:10:12 AM
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Hi, do you see anything grammatically wrong in thess line?

Two different statement.

1. An action comedy inspired by the 1980 movie, The Stunt Man


5 Cewek Jagoan is a movie release on 1980. Directed by Danu Umbara
Cewek Jagoan is a movie released on 2017. Directed by Anggy Umbara

Danu Umbara is a father to Anggy Umbara. So, I want to say this movie is his father's movie.


2. The prequel to Anggy Umbara's father movie, 5 Cewek Jagoan (1980)
FounDit
Posted: Thursday, July 12, 2018 11:41:20 AM

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Amybal wrote:
Hi, do you see anything grammatically wrong in thess line?

Two different statement.

1. An action comedy inspired by the 1980 movie, The Stunt Man
I added italics.

5 Cewek Jagoan is a movie release in 1980. Directed by Danu Umbara
Cewek Jagoan is a movie released in 2017. Directed by Anggy Umbara
Movies are released in a specific year.

Danu Umbara is a father to Anggy Umbara. So, I want to say this movie is his father's movie.
This could be said several ways:

2. The prequel to Anggy Umbara's movie, Cewek Jagoan is his father's movie, 5 Cewek Jagoan, (1980)

Or,
2. The prequel to Anggy Umbara's movie is his father's movie, 5 Cewek Jagoan, (1980)

Or,
2. The prequel to Anggy Umbara's movie, Cewek Jagoan is his father's movie, 5 Cewek Jagoan, released in (1980)



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Amybal
Posted: Thursday, July 12, 2018 11:10:47 PM
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Thank you, FounDit.
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