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Amybal
Posted: Thursday, May 17, 2018 5:07:21 AM
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I wrote a description for a collection (Boxset) which consist of three units. Can you please give your opinion that are there grammatically correct?

Short summary
Watch the country's best stand-up comedians in Kompilasi Lawak Ke Der which consist of Lawak Ke Der 1, Lawak Ke Der 2: Edisi Khas and Lawak Ke Der 3.

Long summary
If you are in need of a good laugh, catch Kompilasi Lawak Ke Der. This boxset consists of Lawak Ke Der 1, Lawak Ke Der 2: Edisi Khas and Lawak Ke Der 3. A series of standup comedy acts at Istana Budaya presenting since 2012 by distinguished actor, producer and director Hans Isaac. It featuring Malaysians’ famous comedians namely Afdlin Shauki, Harith Iskander, Nabil Ahmad, Douglas Lim and many more. You’ll definitely laugh from the beginning to the end.
Drag0nspeaker
Posted: Thursday, May 17, 2018 6:04:08 AM

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Hello again.

There is only one "s" missing from the short description. The compilation (kompilasi) consists of three parts.

The only grammar mistakes I see in the long summary are verb-forms (tenses etc) - there are a couple of other minor points - in the UK, we would normally say 'box-set' and 'stand-up comedy', and the normal idiom is "from beginning to end" (without articles).

Short summary
Watch the country's best stand-up comedians in Kompilasi Lawak Ke Der which consists of Lawak Ke Der 1, Lawak Ke Der 2: Edisi Khas and Lawak Ke Der 3.

Long summary
If you are in need of a good laugh, catch Kompilasi Lawak Ke Der. This box-set consists of Lawak Ke Der 1, Lawak Ke Der 2: Edisi Khas and Lawak Ke Der 3. A series of stand-up comedy acts at Istana Budaya, presented since 2012 by distinguished actor, producer and director Hans Isaac. It features Malaysias’ most famous comedians - Afdlin Shauki, Harith Iskander, Nabil Ahmad, Douglas Lim and many more. You’ll definitely laugh from beginning to end.


Wyrd bið ful aræd - bull!
Amybal
Posted: Saturday, May 19, 2018 11:14:17 AM
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Thank you so much Drag0nspeaker for the correction. It sounds good now.
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