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Koh Elaine
Posted: Thursday, October 05, 2017 5:15:19 AM
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Benefits Bestowed By XYZ Religion on My son and Me

Is the above title grammatical and correctly punctuated?

Thanks.
Islami
Posted: Thursday, October 05, 2017 11:12:11 AM
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Where is helping verb?

Many benefits were/are............
palapaguy
Posted: Thursday, October 05, 2017 11:24:17 AM

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Koh Elaine wrote:
Benefits Bestowed By XYZ Religion on My son and Me

Is the above title grammatical and correctly punctuated?

Thanks.

To me, it just "feels" wrong to use a "giving" verb rather than a "receiving" verb in the case of religion. I would use "received" or "gained" in place of "bestowed" in your title.
Koh Elaine
Posted: Thursday, October 05, 2017 11:31:20 AM
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Thanks, palapaguy.

What about the capitalised words? Are they correct?
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