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Correction - Sentence for a personal statement (Français->Anglais) Options
Louloutte
Posted: Saturday, September 17, 2016 5:55:53 AM

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Hi everyone!

I am French and I would like to translate this idea :
"Mon objectif est de mieux comprendre comment les musées dans cette ville vivante mobilise leurs visiteurs à travers des expositions leur permettant de porter un regard neuf sur le monde."

Is this sentence correct in English?:
"My aim is to better understand how museums in this vibrant city engage their visitors through exhibitions allowing them to take a fresh look at the world around them."

Thank you for your help!
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