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Amybal
Posted: Sunday, February 10, 2019 2:41:49 AM
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Hi, is there anything wrong in these sentences?

Short summary
Grey Trace is left with paralyze after his wife gets killed in a brutal mugging and now his only chance for revenge is an experimental cure, an artificial intelligence implant called Stem.

Long summary
A brutal mugging leaves Grey Trace paralyzed in the hospital and his beloved wife dead. A billionaire inventor soon offers Trace a cure, an artificial intelligence implant called STEM that will enhance his body. Now able to walk, Grey finds that he also has superhuman strength and agility, skills he uses to seek revenge against the thugs who destroyed his life.
FounDit
Posted: Sunday, February 10, 2019 1:27:18 PM

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Amybal wrote:
Hi, is there anything wrong in these sentences?
I see only one word that needs a spelling correction. And STEM was not capitalized in the short summary but was in the long summary. If this was formal writing, I might put a semi-colon after "cure" and after "agility", but as a movie description, it's probably okay.

STEM was an entertaining movie, IMO, but I was a bit disappointed in the way it ended.

Short summary
Grey Trace is left with paralysis after his wife gets killed in a brutal mugging, and now his only chance for revenge is an experimental cure,(;) an artificial intelligence implant called STEM.

Long summary
A brutal mugging leaves Grey Trace paralyzed in the hospital and his beloved wife dead. A billionaire inventor soon offers Trace a cure, an artificial intelligence implant called STEM that will enhance his body. Now able to walk, Grey finds that he also has superhuman strength and agility,(;) skills he uses to seek revenge against the thugs who destroyed his life.


We should look to the past to learn from it, not destroy our future because of it — FounDit
Amybal
Posted: Monday, February 11, 2019 10:23:24 PM
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Thank you FounDit.
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