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Amybal
Posted: Friday, February 8, 2019 2:00:59 PM
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Hi, is there anything wrong in these sentences? And does the short one related to long one?

Short summary
Enjoy these thrilling and pulse-pounding double feature movies with exciting zombies twist in World War Z and Overlord.
Long summary

A double bill pulse-pounding action adventure with exciting twists. In Overlord, with only hours until D-Day, a team of American paratroopers drop into Nazi-occupied France to carry out a mission that’s crucial to the invasion's success. In World War Z, a former United Nations investigator must travel the world to find a way to stop a zombie pandemic.
FounDit
Posted: Friday, February 8, 2019 4:14:00 PM

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Amybal wrote:
Hi, is there anything wrong in these sentences? And does the short one related to long one?

Short summary
Enjoy these thrilling and pulse-pounding double feature movies with exciting zombie twists in World War Z and Overlord.
Long summary

A double bill pulse-pounding action adventure with exciting twists. In Overlord, with only hours until D-Day, a team of American paratroopers drop into Nazi-occupied France to carry out a mission that’s crucial to the invasion's success. In World War Z, a former United Nations investigator must travel the world to find a way to stop a zombie pandemic.


We should look to the past to learn from it, not destroy our future because of it — FounDit
Amybal
Posted: Saturday, February 9, 2019 2:30:08 AM
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Thank you FounDit.

For the long version of the first line can I start with:

Double bill of pulse-pounding action adventures with exciting twists.
FounDit
Posted: Saturday, February 9, 2019 3:18:33 AM

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Amybal wrote:
Thank you FounDit.

For the long version of the first line can I start with:

Double bill of pulse-pounding action adventures with exciting twists.


No. It doesn't sound right without the article "A".


We should look to the past to learn from it, not destroy our future because of it — FounDit
Amybal
Posted: Sunday, February 10, 2019 2:18:41 AM
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Noted FounDit and thank you.

Then I will go as per below:

A double bill of pulse-pounding action adventures with exciting twists. In Overlord, with only hours until D-Day, a team of American paratroopers drop into Nazi-occupied France to carry out a mission that’s crucial to the invasion's success. In World War Z, a former United Nations investigator must travel the world to find a way to stop a zombie pandemic.
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