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Carmenex
Posted: Thursday, January 10, 2019 11:33:13 AM
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I would please ask you if the expressions in bold are correct in the following:
I appreciate/value the opportunity to work on providing tailored insurance products for/to such sectors as the energy industry which has highly specialised needs, including (the need for?) risk management insurance solutions that specifically (can it be omitted?) cover cyber-crime.
I can bring to the role of actuary and to X Inc. my competencies/abilities in mathematical modelling, data processing and statistical analysis, and my attention to details, team-working skills and business acumen.
FounDit
Posted: Thursday, January 10, 2019 3:02:31 PM

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Carmenex wrote:
I would please ask you if the expressions in bold are correct in the following:
I suggest:

I appreciate [both work, but I like this one] the opportunity to provide tailored insurance products to such sectors as the energy industry which has highly specialised needs, including that of risk management insurance solutions that cover cyber-crime.
I can bring to the role of actuary, and to X Inc., my [again both can work, but I like:] abilities in mathematical modelling, data processing and statistical analysis, and my attention to details, team-working skills and business acumen.




We should look to the past to learn from it, not destroy our future because of it — FounDit
Carmenex
Posted: Friday, January 11, 2019 11:22:20 AM
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FounDit wrote:
Carmenex wrote:
I would please ask you if the expressions in bold are correct in the following:
I suggest:

I appreciate [both work, but I like this one] the opportunity to provide tailored insurance products to such sectors as the energy industry which has highly specialised needs, including that of risk management insurance solutions that cover cyber-crime.
I can bring to the role of actuary, and to X Inc., my [again both can work, but I like:] abilities in mathematical modelling, data processing and statistical analysis, and my attention to details, team-working skills and business acumen.




Hi FounDit, and thank you for your suggestions. Only a couple of questions: with ... the opportunity to work on providing tailored insurance products ..., I mean ... the opportunity to (be engaged in)/(be involved in) providing ... Is there any difference in meaning between it and ... the opportunity to provide ...?
Can that cover be replaced by covering, or would it be better to use the former?
FounDit
Posted: Friday, January 11, 2019 11:42:31 AM

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Carmenex wrote:
FounDit wrote:
Carmenex wrote:
I would please ask you if the expressions in bold are correct in the following:
I suggest:

I appreciate [both work, but I like this one] the opportunity to provide tailored insurance products to such sectors as the energy industry which has highly specialised needs, including that of risk management insurance solutions that cover cyber-crime.
I can bring to the role of actuary, and to X Inc., my [again both can work, but I like:] abilities in mathematical modelling, data processing and statistical analysis, and my attention to details, team-working skills and business acumen.




Hi FounDit, and thank you for your suggestions. Only a couple of questions: with ... the opportunity to work on providing tailored insurance products ..., I mean ... the opportunity to (be engaged in)/(be involved in) providing ... Is there any difference in meaning between it and ... the opportunity to provide ...?
Providing and being engaged/involved in providing mean the same thing. You would be offering, or providing, a product that has already been created. If, however, you mean developing the product itself, that would be different.

You would then say you appreciate the opportunity to create such a product, or the opportunity to create and provide such a product.

Can that cover be replaced by covering, or would it be better to use the former?
Yes. I think either one will work fine.


We should look to the past to learn from it, not destroy our future because of it — FounDit
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