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Atatürk
Posted: Friday, November 9, 2018 12:02:25 PM
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Having completed the Millon test, those who scored above 75 on the dysthymia scale questionnaire of the test were selected conveniently and sent to a psychiatrist to further confirm their being dysthymia cases.

What would be your improvement to the above?
FounDit
Posted: Friday, November 9, 2018 12:48:40 PM

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Atatürk wrote:
Having completed the Millon test, those who scored above 75 on the dysthymia scale questionnaire of the test were selected conveniently and sent to a psychiatrist to further confirm their being dysthymia cases.

What would be your improvement to the above?


Perhaps:

Having completed the Millon test, those who scored above 75 on the dysthymia scale were selected to be seen by a psychiatrist to further confirm their condition.


We should look to the past to learn from it, not destroy our future because of it — FounDit
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