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Amybal
Posted: Monday, October 1, 2018 5:47:31 AM
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Hi, do you see anything grammatically wrong in these sentence? Basically this description is for a box set which contain 3-movie in one platform.

Short summary
Catch up with Dracula, Mavis and the rest of the monsters with this fun box set of Hotel Transylvania 1, Hotel Transylvania 2 and Hotel Transylvania 3: Summer Vacation.

Long summary
Trilogy of animated comedies about a ghoulish five-star resort for the world's most famous monsters. In Hotel Transylvania 1 & 2, check out the monster gang as they live it up at a lavish five-stake resort, where no humans are allowed...until now! Then in Hotel Transylvania 3, join Dracula, Mavis and all of your favorite monsters for fun and adventure on the high seas as they embark on a monster cruise vacation!
Drag0nspeaker
Posted: Monday, October 1, 2018 6:20:12 AM

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Hi!

I haven't studied it in detail for grammatical errors, but it reads well.

There seems to be a typo in the long summary - "five-stake" should maybe be "five-star"?
Though "five-stake" could be a joke from the film.

Wyrd bið ful aræd - bull!
Amybal
Posted: Monday, October 1, 2018 10:59:58 PM
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Thank you Drag0nspeaker. Yes, five-star sounds good.
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