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Amybal
Posted: Wednesday, July 11, 2018 11:25:53 PM
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Hi, do you see anything grammatically wrong in these sentence?

Short summary
Woo Jin works hard to raise his young son Ji Ho after his wife Soo A died a year previously. But when the rainy season miraculously brings her back to them, she does not remember anything.

Long Summary
Woo Jin takes care of his son Ji Ho alone after his wife Soo A passed away. Before she passed away, she promised she would be back on a rainy day one year later. One year later, Soo A appears again, but she does not remember anything. Will she accept the truth and built a happy family?
FounDit
Posted: Thursday, July 12, 2018 11:49:30 AM

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Amybal wrote:
Hi, do you see anything grammatically wrong in these sentence?

Short summary
Woo Jin works hard to raise his young son, Ji Ho, after his wife, Soo A, died a year ago. But when the rainy season miraculously brings her back to them, she does not remember anything.

Long Summary
Woo Jin takes care of his son, Ji Ho, after his wife, Soo A, passes away. Before she died, however, she promised she would be back on a rainy day one year later. One year later, Soo A appears again, but she does not remember anything. Will she accept the truth and be able to build a happy family?


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Amybal
Posted: Thursday, July 12, 2018 11:12:58 PM
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Thank you so much, FounDit.
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