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Hi, do you see anything grammatically wrong in thess line?
Two different statement.
1. An action comedy inspired by the 1980 movie, The Stunt Man
5 Cewek Jagoan is a movie release on 1980. Directed by Danu Umbara
Cewek Jagoan is a movie released on 2017. Directed by Anggy Umbara
Danu Umbara is a father to Anggy Umbara. So, I want to say this movie is his father's movie.
2. The prequel to Anggy Umbara's father movie, 5 Cewek Jagoan (1980)
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Amybal wrote:Hi, do you see anything grammatically wrong in thess line?
Two different statement.
1. An action comedy inspired by the 1980 movie, The Stunt Man
I added italics.
5 Cewek Jagoan is a movie release in 1980. Directed by Danu Umbara
Cewek Jagoan is a movie released in 2017. Directed by Anggy Umbara
Movies are released in a specific year.
Danu Umbara is a father to Anggy Umbara. So, I want to say this movie is his father's movie.
This could be said several ways:
2. The prequel to Anggy Umbara's movie, Cewek Jagoan is his father's movie, 5 Cewek Jagoan, (1980)
Or,
2. The prequel to Anggy Umbara's movie is his father's movie, 5 Cewek Jagoan, (1980)
Or,
2. The prequel to Anggy Umbara's movie, Cewek Jagoan is his father's movie, 5 Cewek Jagoan, released in (1980)
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Thank you, FounDit.
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