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Amybal
Posted: Monday, June 11, 2018 12:43:29 PM
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Hi, do you see anything grammatically wrong in these sentence?

Short summary
A film comprises three different short stories that revolve around a similar theme: a sinister presence when the clock strikes 3.00 am.

Long summary
In this Thai horror anthology, vengeful ghosts and restless spirits are out to terrorize people in three separate short stories. The first story is about Pim, a toll collector working the night shift. Alone, she is terrorized by an evil spirit determined to take her life. The next story follows a painter who seduced by a mysterious woman to haunt him. Lastly, the third story is about a film shoot gone wrong when the set is invaded by an unknown force.
NKM
Posted: Monday, June 11, 2018 9:03:22 PM

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OK, except for one sentence.

 "The next story follows a painter who is seduced by a mysterious woman who haunts him."

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