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s21d
Posted: Friday, January 12, 2018 8:42:18 AM
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1. As you embark on a new journey, may the heaven's joys befall on you and every day of your life be filled with fragrance. Let sickness, struggle and troubled mind stranger to you.



2. The friendship that blossomed in class 10 has continued over the years through various social media.Now, as you embark on a new journey, we wish you truckload of love, happiness and prosperity.

Kindly check both the notes for grammatical mistakes. These are written for my friend who is getting married soon.
FounDit
Posted: Friday, January 12, 2018 10:36:21 AM

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s21d wrote:
1. As you embark on a new journey, may the heaven's joys befall on you and may every day of your life be filled with fragrance. Let sickness, struggle and a troubled mind be a stranger to you.



2. The friendship that blossomed in class 10 has continued over the years through various social media. Now, as you embark on a new journey, we wish you a truckload of love, happiness and prosperity.

Kindly check both the notes for grammatical mistakes. These are written for my friend who is getting married soon.


A great many people will think they are thinking when they are merely rearranging their prejudices. ~ William James ~
NKM
Posted: Friday, January 12, 2018 11:41:29 AM

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1. As you embark on a new journey, may the heaven's joys befall descend on you and every day of your life be filled with fragrance. Let sickness, struggle and a troubled mind be strangers to you.

2. The friendship that blossomed in class 10 has continued over the years through various social media. Now, as you embark on a new journey, we wish you truckloads of love, happiness and prosperity.

Romany
Posted: Friday, January 12, 2018 12:49:51 PM
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Second post in a row I've agreed more with NK: "Befall" was incorrect - and the plural "strangers" "Let sickness, struggle and a troubled mind be strangers..." was needed. He beat me to it!
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